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Saturday, April 27, 2013

The Serial Killer Chapter 3: Hell is empty

-The king’s son, Ferdinand, With hair up-staring—then, like reeds, not hair—
Was the first man that leaped, cried, “Hell is empty
And all the devils are here.”

Dante closed the book. Finding the quote from the Bard's "Tempest" very true to his situation. He looked up at the ceiling and sighed, what was he doing with his life? He thought about the road that had led up to his current life of madness and murder. His mind flashed back to a few weeks back...

"What the hell was that, Lockman?" Yelled Dante's boss in his office. Dante, who was working as a salesman at the local Home Depot at the time, stood in his boss' office, silent. "You knocked over some mailboxes, and a few of our employees, and more than a few of our customers. Customers! Do you know how hard it is to reply to all these complaints while trying to save your arse, Lockman? I'm done with you, out the office, now. You're fired." Said his boss as he picked up the ringing phone and motioned him to leave his office. Dante walked out, head down as he passed his ex-colleagues and put the standard uniform down, putting on his old T-shirt. He walked out of the store, thinking about his plans now that he lost his job. It wasn't the first time he got fired because of some lame accident where he wasn't even responsible for starting. And when he reached home, he flopped onto the bed and slept. A few days later, he trudged to the toilet, thinking that he'd somehow be better. But deep in his mind, he snapped. He stopped dead in his tracks, sensing the psychopath in him unleashed., the hidden personality he had been unaware for years has been let out of his frail cage. He let out a sigh, looking at the mirror and seeing his true personality, a madman who has nothing to lose. He picked up a map of his neighborhood and the surrounding area, circling random houses and finally, the house of his old boss. And then, he looked back at the mirror, picking up his old hockey mask. And then, as slowly as he could, he picked up a dagger...

Dante snapped back into reality, waking up from his trip down memory lane. He took a look at his gallery of masks, and took the Guy Fawkes mask down from the wall. He took a nylon rope from his cabinet and twisted a knot in the middle. After doing all the preparation needed, he stuck the stuff into his bag and walked out of the door.

"How's it going, Poole?" Said Sergeant Payne as he entered the apartment of the victim. "Nothing yet, but I'm sure it's him. The "Messenger", that is." Replied Poole as he continued to snap pictures of the messy apartment. "The Messenger? Who's that?" Asked Payne. "Oh, so you don't know! They gave a nickname to the guy who killed uhh...... Freddie something."Replied Poole. "Ah, that guy. So, another clean cut?" Payne didn't stop asking questions. "Always questioning, I like that! Anyway, it would seem that our victim here was killed by the same M.O.-Which is, a clean cut to his throat. But I'd like to run some tests on the body." Payne looked at the dead boy- He couldn't be more than 25 years old, poor boy. "We're contacting his friends and family, sir." Chirped Milo as he walked in through the door. "You do that, Milo. Poole, send me the results as soon as you receive them." "Yes sir," replied Poole and Milo.

Dante walked towards Keanu Walk, passing the Rosewall Asylum, he remembered the tragic incarceration of his more or less crazy grandfather...

-1983, Rosewall Asylum, Shadowlake City-

"Wait! Grandpa! No! Don't...Don't take him away..." Little Dante's yell fell into a silent weep as tears streamed down his red cheeks. He watched silently as the men from the Asylum pulled his grandfather into a van, and his weep slowly turned into a sulk as the van disappeared from view. His grandparents and his father were his only family. And now his most beloved grandfather was locked into a nuthouse for being unnatural. Inside young Dante, a little part of his innocence died. That was the moment when he learned that life just wasn't fair.

Dante passed the now abandoned asylum and walked towards his target, leaving the tragic memory buried deep in his mind.

As he came out of the elevator, he looked at the door of his victim's apartment. Not wanting to waste time, he quickly surveyed the scene, making sure that nobody was around, and started to pick the lock. A slight click came from the door and before you knew it, he was silently creeping up his victim. He wore his mask, readied his rope and placed it around the woman's neck, and pulled back before she could react. The knot of the rope was right in the middle of the rope, accurately placed on the victim's larynx. Dante applied pressure on the rope, placing his foot on her back and kicked hard. The extra pressure crushed the victim's neck and she fell on the floor, lifeless.

Right when he finished his message, he heard a sharp scream come from the door. He turned and ran towards the window, and jumped. He landed on top of a parked car, and ran into an ally. He removed his mask and pocketed it along with his brush, before examining his injuries. Jumping from the first floor and landing on the car minimized his injury, but a nasty bruise was still left on his arm, the bruise being made from the top of the car. He tucked everything in neatly, making sure nothing seemed out of place and changed into a blue jacket, and walked out of the other side of the ally, walking home as he tried to shake the shrill scream from his mind.

Thursday, April 25, 2013

Every 100- The third milestone (and additional news)

YUSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! We finally reached 300! It's actually greater than my expectations, I'm actually looking for 200-ish views in such a short time, but my readers(you) have been pretty enthusiastic to view my stuff and here we are! 300 views!!!!!

In other news, I'm currently working on the 3rd chapter of The Serial Killer, and planning the 3rd Chapter of The Portrait. I'm guessing it'll be posted in about 2-3 days (I don't know, I'm a lazy guy) So all of you out there watch out! I'm back.

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Cancelled

I am sorry to inform my readers that the story I promised, "Geography" will not be written as I cannot form the idea scraps into a complete story. As it had started out as a small, incomplete idea during lessons, it never had the chance to develop. Therefore I am not able to fully write the story out. Again, I am sorry.

Thursday, April 18, 2013

The Portrait Chapter 2: The second victim

Three days after the funeral, I was sitting in my apartment, thing about my next step. And then the telephone rang. Naturally, I picked it up and answered, "Hello?" "Hey, it's Charles, remember me?" Charles was another friend of mine, specializing in English Horror novels and making a lot of money with his talent. Of course I remember him."Yes, of course I do. I haven't seen you for what? 3 years?" I asked. "Yeah, give or take. I'm calling you to let you know that it happened. It happened again." Charles' tone suddenly got serious. I got curious. What happened? "So? What exactly happened?" "He's dead. Ian got a portrait and now he's dead. The people there saw his portrait fall off a balcony and the next thing you know his skull cracked. You think this has anything to do with Ryan?" Charles' grim voice rang in my ear. My only reaction was to reply with uncertainty, "Ummm... I think so. I mean, they can't both die right after they did something to their portrait and then die from  the thing they did, right? It can't be a coincidence. Thanks for the heads up, Charles. Working on a new novel?" "Yeah. This topic piqued my interest. Plus, Ian used to sit next to me in class. How can I not write something to honor him?" And with the lingering question, he hung up.

I started packing. I had to get to the scene of the crime and take a look at the body and the portrait. Thirty minutes later, I arrived at the scene. Fortunately, the body was still there, so I used my privileges as a P.I. to get into the crime scene. "So, if it isn't the Private eye. So, who hired you this time? The victim doesn't seem like any major character." It was Corporal Benny Chen speaking. I hated him, always getting in the way for no reason. So I looked at him and said in a serious tone, "No one. I used to study with this guy, it just piqued my interest. It's not everyday that you get to see someone killed by a painting. Any more questions?" The corporal looked at me and said, "No further questions, my honor," and he walked away. I took a look at the body, lying on the balcony. Ian hadn't changed his haircut, always so messy and uncut. His face looked shocked and his pair of yellow-rimmed spectacles were askew. He was bleeding from the top of his head, causing the blood to soak his messy, untamed hair. His jaw was open, like he didn't expect it. Well of course he wouldn't expect it, he got killed by his own painting! Thinking of this, I chuckled slightly.

I walked over to Corporal Chen and asked him if I could take a look at the portrait, and he said yes. Bringing the portrait to me, I got a closer look at Ian's portrait. In the painting, he was grinning stupidly, and everything looked normal, save for the askew pair of spectacles and bloody hair. It looked exactly like his corpse. I thanked the Corporal for letting me see the portrait, and I walked home.

Back in my apartment/office, I sighed and plopped onto my couch and got thinking. It couldn't be a coincidence that the two of them died after doing the exact same thing to their portrait that caused their deaths. I took out a piece of paper and started writing.
A study in the death of portraits

1st victim: Ryan Y. (Death by drowning)
2nd victim: Ian W. (Death by blunt force trauma; fell off a balcony figuratively)
Anything in common: studied at the same school, deaths caused by mysterious portraits

Portraits: Strange, mysterious, possesses powers that cause death. WITCHCRAFT?

After writing the long list down, it hit me. What if, the strange deaths were caused by the most cliche powers in a fantasy novel? What if they died from witchcraft and magic and stuff? I took a look at the capital letters WITCHCRAFT on my paper, and decided to check the library for anything magic related.

I walked out of my apartment and decided to go to the old library 2 blocks away. People say that the owner there had an extensive collection of witchcraft and magic related books.

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Finally reaching the 200 mark-A Milestone

Well, Hello again. It's been some time(not really) since I posted. Now that I re-entered this blog after some absence and conjuring up ideas for my next short stories, I have gleefully found out that my dearing blog, dedicated to writing mediocre stories has finally reached 200. I truly thank all of my readers for supporting me, and I'm sure that I'll work harder(right?).

And this marks the end of this announcement, until next time.